Rachel
-Strong opening shot
-Like the changes in colour - keep it consistent though
-Split screen audio volume change
-Out of bed-fade audio in a little more gently
Narrative ~
-Response - Left screen slower/relaxed
- Right more pacey/stressed/pressure
?Some make one screen?? My eyes
Getting off train? Need a rest
As right screen goes home audio jerks a little
However 2nd half exellent
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